Evaluation

Berlin Trip

For my third and final news story I wanted to report the news for the up and coming trip to Berlin because I'm going myself so therefore I can relate to the news story and put more emotion into it. In my news bulletin I asked the question if the price was too expensive and asked a reliable source. 


This is my final edit of my news story.



This is me conducting a question in an interview. I had to edit myself out for professional reasons and also to make the news bulletin more realistic.






Final draft of my script


First draft of my script

Cash Machine News Story

This is my final edit for my news story. 


This is me conducting an interview however in my 30 second news bulletin I cut down the question and edited me out so it makes it more realistic. 



This is my final script where i condensed everything I had written into 30 seconds to make it more realistic. 

This is my first draft for my selected news story. 

College Food Prices News Story

For my first news story I decided to talk about the food prices at college just because it applies to everybody at college (our age range) and is a matter that alot of people debate upon. I asked the question if people think that the food prices are too dear and if they are how they can resolve this. 


I went round college photographing prices for different food and snacks. I wanted to show the evidence to back up my story.

 This is the first draft of my script about the college food prices. In order to fit everything into 30 seconds I had to shorten alot of my text and make it more snappy. 





This is my final draft for my script which I did my very best to fit it into 30 seconds.






This is my first recording of my news story, however I used the full interviews in this recording. Listening back I decided to cut certain bits due to the fact they weren't needed. 

This is my final edit of my news recording which I am very pleased with.